I’m sharing the most recent feedback I’ve received on my yet-to-be-published contemporary YA novel The Space Between. The Space Between is the story of a girl whose life unravels after her best friend goes missing in mysterious circumstances. I wrote a post a few weeks ago about how I’m finding the process of pitching my … More Positive feedback for The Space Between – huzzah!
This is just going to be a quick post. My MS is open in another tab and I can hardly wait to jump in and keep working on it. Some thoughts on this feedback and revision process that I’m going through right now. It doesn’t hurt as much as I thought it might I wasn’t … More Deep in revisions
Waiting for feedback is a weird kind of limbo. My story is out with people – SEVEN people in fact. Probably too many but I figure some of them won’t manage to read it. And some of them it just won’t be their kind of story. But some of them hopefully will try to see … More Amazing and Terrifying – the theme for the week
In my day-job, I supervise staff. We’re taught to give feedback in a ‘sandwich’. The bread is the good stuff (I really appreciated how you handled X or I know how hard you’ve worked to improve your Y). The ham, cheese and mayo, or Wagyu beef and horseradish are the things that could be improved … More You’ve got pickle on your shirt